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It's too stiff. Even the action scenes. Have them actually looking at each other. Not just staring blankly.
Also. Backgrounds. She was sitting in a room with no furniture.
But yeah. They were too stiff. It looked awkward when say he pointed or she was on the laptop.
Make it flow more and you'll have something good.
Cool.
-KevO
Author's Response:
Yes I have tried to make the characters less stiff for the future eps.
Only thing I can defend is the room with no furniture. It's supposed to be just that, a vacant room with nothing in there. Which is explained in Ep.2.
Thank your for watching and for the review
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The animation was decent, and the concept was funny.
Though I think the voice acting could be MUCH better.
It sounded like they were reading the lines off the page.
They need to actually get into character.
So yeah. Voices make a big part of a flash, and it actually made me like this one less.
It sounded so forced...
Sorry.
Good flash, mediocre voices. Could use improvement.
-KevO
Author's Response:
hey, aren't you in a collab with me? I forget which one, I'm in five.
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That was pretty bad.
The only parts that were good were Camron23s. The rest of them were of awful quality.
A tip for the next time you organize a collab Camron23: If the part sucks, TURN IT DOWN. Only accept QUALITY.
And if you dont want to turn them down, then tell them how they can improve.
But yeah the Diglett and Dragonball scenes were funny.
They had good drawings and animation.
The ending dragged on WAY too long, and it wasnt even funny.
And whoever did those Mario scenes? Get a voice actor! You sound like a little kid!
Give Mario the glory he deserves. Not a 12 year old's voice.
Id hate to bash on this but it was bad. It could have had MUCH more potential.
Let me say this. Right now, this would have been MUCH better with Camron23's parts alone.
Yeah.
Sp of you're organizing another one, remember. ONLY ACCEPT QUALITY PARTS.
Please take this advice and make us a much better one!
-KevO
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Dance, Ed. Dance!
*barfs*
It's happy vomit!
NICE CARTOONZ!
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Awesome!
I wish I knew WHO voiced WHAT.
Cant wait for some more from you, Ed.
-KevO
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THAT IS INCREDIBLE.
How do you do this? Do you draw each one and take a photo?
My god this is amazing and truly an animation feat.
I must do it sometime. Tell me! Please!
So yeah I think this is amazing and shows some true skill in animation and timeing with good music and sound effects.
And I think the design was perfect for this kind of thing.
-KevO
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yep, we draw one character, and then one more, and then one more, and then one more again... And so on. :) Mraw started with this kind of animation, though, so he's the beginner! :D
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The frame by frame is amazing.
Sadly...I had no idea what was going on.
It was cool though! Nice effects and all!
Id like to see more from you!
-KevO
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Not only the animation and style but the very "feel" of the video just touched me.
I felt so at ease while watching it.
Bringing emotion is a powerful ability in animation.
Good job, cant wait to see more.
-KevO
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How is this a flash? It's just a picture, with a spinning hand layer and a mouth layer.
It's good art but it needs more animation. Sorry.
Just use this and improve on yourself!
-KevO
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I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
But yeah that was fun. If you can show a silly adventure and it's enjoyable then I think you did a good job.
I cant wait to see the next one!
-KevO
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