Score: 10

"That was awesome."

submission: The 5 Hour Collab IV

date: June 24, 2009

I understand there were file problems at the end but I would have liked a play button.

Haha I am the head of the robot. Awesome.

You definitely picked quality. I liked the whole thing. And with the scene select I can watch my favorites nonstop!

Great collab.

-KevO

Score: 4

"Ehh..."

submission: Project Seven Teaser

date: June 16, 2009

Well you obviously have an idea of where you want this flash to go. It is clear that you have this concept in your head about these characters and this plot.

Now you just need to improve on yourself and execute this a bit better.

First off try making the characters look less static. They always seemed as though they were sitting in one position the whole time every shot.

Like, when they're talking, for example, you could have their expressions change or their head move.

And on the note of talking you should try full on lip sync instead of just a mout opening and closing.

The still-ness of this really made it hard to follow the story.

The voices could have been better. They sounded too much like reading lines off paper. The guy's voice had no character. With a few tweaks that could improve. Voice acting is a big part of animation and can make or break the flash.

Like I said it was really confusing. The guy just started talking about his body in the same still position the whole time. Maybe if there was an actually animated scene showing him being taken over by some force then it would be more understandable.

I cant stress enough how important movement is. I found it very bothersome that the characters would sit in the same position. Like when the girl is looking back at the guy. And then you reuse that drawing.

So! I'd say you should improve the graphics, try animating some more (preferably FBF), maybe detail things more such as backgrounds, have more character in the voices, show some life, and make sure the plot is understandable.

If this was supposed to be a teaser then it should have been made a bit differently.

You have potential now let's see it.

I hope this has helped. It is in no way meant to be offensive.

-KevO

Score: 8

"Wow."

submission: Birthday 18

date: June 12, 2009

That was really sad.

I'm so sorry.

On an animation stand point, I think it was good.

And it also shows that you can makes sad flashes.

Though that was...really sad.

Good luck and happy birthday.

-KevO

Score: 8

"Fun!"

submission: RocketRide

date: June 10, 2009

That was good!

Now it's time for a big flash, dunder!

Or other collaborative projects...hm yes.

Awesome color choices and animating.

-KevO

Score: 9

"I love the idea."

submission: Did You Hear That?

date: June 8, 2009

I once did this in my animation class.

It's always a great concept.

You got a good batch of artists to do it, too!

Congrats! It was good! Lots of creative freedom and good animation.

Ill keep an eye out to join the next one!

-KevO

Score: 9

"That was beautiful."

submission: Three Wishes

date: May 11, 2009

Simple. Funny. I like ow much they moved for just standing there. Great drawings. And amazing voices.

Keep it up.

-KevO

Score: 10

"Oh my god."

submission: Pico 09

date: April 30, 2009

That was incredible.

The animation, the drawings, the sounds and music! What's funny is that the singing was good!

Oh man Yotam you just get better with every flash!

That was incredible despite how sick it was.

I havent eaten breakfast so I cant lose my breakfast after watching this!

-KevO

Score: 8

"Awesome!"

submission: TASTY

date: April 24, 2009

You never seize to amaze me. Especially with your timing and syncing. Great job.

Cant wait for your next flash!

-KevO

Score: 7

"Hmmm..."

submission: Dead Bodies

date: April 15, 2009

It had good ideas, just needed to be displayed better.

Maybe make the characters move more and tweak their design a bit.

But yeah you had good intentions and you can obviously animate so yeah just improve on yourself and you'll be good.

-KevO

Score: 10

"That was fun."

submission: Rwd: 028 Daviday

date: April 11, 2009

Loved it!

See! The RWD is still alive! Funymony was right! *wink*

I love the beginning. And the middle and end.

Funymony's part was hilarious and SHORT!

All of thems were good. Ive watched this like 4 times already.

Sure kicks my flash's butt that I made for him.

Cheers.

-KevO

I dont know why I said cheers.